The-Scourge's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[cupcake?]

the colors

and style, it reminds me of catoblepas, more funny than weird though

TheBoogley responds:

damn Catoblepas, he's always copying me! :(

:3

[Madness Correlation]

Eh, It was pretty good

But I dont understand how this took a year to make, I know there were only five animaters but for the skill level of this peice I dont see the appropriate pay off for the time that this took to make. Alot of the parts were choppy and even though most of you used sprites (I think)? It seemed like most of you were getting lazy/bored of the collab. My favoruite was delamortes parts.

7IsUnlucky responds:

it took a year because it got cancelled in the middle and not many people were joining

[Purple Sawdust]

Love the ending

Haha, the ending was the best where he just like slid back after he had finally completed his game...only to have it destroyed, awesome. I think the art at the beginning was a little sloppy but after that it was pretty much smooth sailing.
Good job!

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks, but actually, he slid back in shock. The slide was after the cannon ball hit. Regardless, thanks mate.

[Madness Enforcer 2]

For 3 months you should've put more into it.

Ok First, the bad news/criticism, whatever.
-First thing I noticed was that the sound was off, I think you should try to position your sound better.
-Second was the walking, it was very choppy, and I think you should adapt a more organic and less jaunty motion, Also when they were walking they were moving very slow and soon after the beginning I was like "omg is he gonna keep walking this slow through the entire movie?" thankfully he got a little faster
-third, I remember him throwing a grenade into a mass of at least 5 people, when the explosion was cleared (well no explosion actually, just a white bang effect scaled out) there were only about 2 and a half bodies, I know its a cartoon but cartoons still need a hold on realism here.
-fourth, also near the beginning the guy like handed him the gun, that was pretty lame, in real life you cant slowly reach for a gun someone is pointing at you, this tied into the fact that there were very few laws of logic in play here, like at the end where he jumped over the whole ladder ledge, he *tapped* a guy lightly on the head and he died,
-fifth and final of the criticism, he could sneak up a guy and literally just poke him like he would with a pin and the guy took this as a fatal wound. You, need to make the wounds deeper, and slower, an object would have to slow down when going through the body mass, and it would have to go in much farther to do any life threatening damage.
ok onto the good news, Im sorry to say this list is shorter.
one) it wasnt a bad movie overall it could just use some spread out touching up, I've seen alot worse movies than this
two) I dont know how long you've practiced animation before this but it was pretty good for your second submission
three)if you have room from criticism you have room for potential, keep up the good work.

hiddencamy responds:

I thank you for the comment why it took 3 months is that i was busy most of the time

[Blood by MCR]

Needs work

I would have given you higher because of the (Awesome) song you used except the animation and drawing needs some major touching up, 50% of the movie is some guy going like "ooooooh" while the highlight is some two framed animated blood with white streaks spurting from some guys arms.
It wasn't bad but it needs a redo

Yoshidude565 responds:

shit

[the shadow: trailer]

um...

I dont know if it was the font you used or something or just my computer but all the text cut off at the right...like I could only see half a sentence. Check to make sure your using static text because I know dynamic text will sometimes cut in half
other than that it was pretty good but try to improve your drawing

bomalags responds:

uhm, i'm not sure too, because when I watch it, there's no problem with the text

[Fully Exploding]

Not bad

I like how you did the collapsing platforms at the end but other than that I wud have put more time into it and wud have gotten a higher score

TheRealGreenEagle responds:

Yea, it was a quickie. But I like how it came out.